Some say I'm a bit stickler for grammar, but if it's hard to read, it can be hard to understand. So here are some text/grammar errors I came across in quests/Journal text:
1. Camelot Hills Explorer: Difwych Family
The word 'face' should be changed to 'facing'. The words 'the punish' should be changed to 'punishment'. And 'of' should be changed to 'for'. There should be a comma after the word 'crimes'. All this makes the sentence flow better and is the correct tense.
'Instead of facing punishment for their crimes, they have fled to the hills and forests to the east.'